Re: Grammar/punctuation fixes

Hello,

On Aug 5, 2024 at 9:48:47 PM, Jonathan S. Katz <jkatz(at)postgresql(dot)org> wrote:

> On 8/5/24 5:46 PM, Anthony DeBarros wrote:
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> Hi,
>
>
> I'd like to submit some grammar/punctuation fixes for the PostgreSQL
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> website. Is a pull request permitted or should I discuss proposed
>
> changes here first?
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> The changes mainly involve correct use of commas and semicolons.
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>
> Discussing here is fine - bonus points for attaching a diff with the
> changes :)
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> Thanks,
>
> Jonathan
>
>
Respectfully submitting a patch to make the download pages about macOS and
Windows more readable via some minor edits.

On the Windows download page[1] and macOS download page[2]:

- Transform the paragraph of items included in the EDB installer into a
list for readability.
- Split a long sentence in two.
- Trim some wordiness/redundancies.
- Remove italics around “Advanced users”.

[1] https://www.postgresql.org/download/windows/
[2] https://www.postgresql.org/download/macosx/

Thank you for considering,
Anthony DeBarros