| From: | Dave Page <dpage(at)pgadmin(dot)org> |
|---|---|
| To: | Anthony DeBarros <anthonymdebarros(at)gmail(dot)com> |
| Cc: | pgsql-www(at)lists(dot)postgresql(dot)org, "Jonathan S(dot) Katz" <jkatz(at)postgresql(dot)org> |
| Subject: | Re: Grammar/punctuation fixes |
| Date: | 2024-08-12 13:39:55 |
| Message-ID: | CA+OCxowpAZjqUnGFM8J9DuRLxsueXyssa5iGtJ+bUkTedgbtQg@mail.gmail.com |
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Hi
On Sat, 10 Aug 2024 at 18:52, Anthony DeBarros <anthonymdebarros(at)gmail(dot)com>
wrote:
>
> Respectfully submitting a patch to make the download pages about macOS and
> Windows more readable via some minor edits.
>
> On the Windows download page[1] and macOS download page[2]:
>
>
> - Transform the paragraph of items included in the EDB installer into
> a list for readability.
> - Split a long sentence in two.
> - Trim some wordiness/redundancies.
> - Remove italics around “Advanced users”.
>
>
> [1] https://www.postgresql.org/download/windows/
> [2] https://www.postgresql.org/download/macosx/
>
Thanks - patch committed!
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