Re: Grammar/punctuation fixes

You're welcome. If you like that general approach -- minimal edits focused
on readability/brevity -- I'd be glad to look for other places on the site
for edits.

On Mon, Aug 12, 2024 at 9:40 AM Dave Page <dpage(at)pgadmin(dot)org> wrote:

> Hi
>
> On Sat, 10 Aug 2024 at 18:52, Anthony DeBarros <anthonymdebarros(at)gmail(dot)com>
> wrote:
>
>>
>> Respectfully submitting a patch to make the download pages about macOS
>> and Windows more readable via some minor edits.
>>
>> On the Windows download page[1] and macOS download page[2]:
>>
>>
>> - Transform the paragraph of items included in the EDB installer into
>> a list for readability.
>> - Split a long sentence in two.
>> - Trim some wordiness/redundancies.
>> - Remove italics around “Advanced users”.
>>
>>
>> [1] https://www.postgresql.org/download/windows/
>> [2] https://www.postgresql.org/download/macosx/
>>
>
> Thanks - patch committed!
>
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> Dave Page
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