Re: Grammar/punctuation fixes

On Mon, 12 Aug 2024 at 15:26, Anthony DeBarros <anthonymdebarros(at)gmail(dot)com>
wrote:

> You're welcome. If you like that general approach -- minimal edits focused
> on readability/brevity -- I'd be glad to look for other places on the site
> for edits.
>

Please feel free. Improvements to readability are always welcome.

Thanks!

> On Mon, Aug 12, 2024 at 9:40 AM Dave Page <dpage(at)pgadmin(dot)org> wrote:
>
>> Hi
>>
>> On Sat, 10 Aug 2024 at 18:52, Anthony DeBarros <
>> anthonymdebarros(at)gmail(dot)com> wrote:
>>
>>>
>>> Respectfully submitting a patch to make the download pages about macOS
>>> and Windows more readable via some minor edits.
>>>
>>> On the Windows download page[1] and macOS download page[2]:
>>>
>>>
>>> - Transform the paragraph of items included in the EDB installer
>>> into a list for readability.
>>> - Split a long sentence in two.
>>> - Trim some wordiness/redundancies.
>>> - Remove italics around “Advanced users”.
>>>
>>>
>>> [1] https://www.postgresql.org/download/windows/
>>> [2] https://www.postgresql.org/download/macosx/
>>>
>>
>> Thanks - patch committed!
>>
>> --
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>>

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