Re: Typo in perform.sgml?

From: Tatsuo Ishii <ishii(at)sraoss(dot)co(dot)jp>
To: tgl(at)sss(dot)pgh(dot)pa(dot)us
Cc: rjuju123(at)gmail(dot)com, pgsql-docs(at)lists(dot)postgresql(dot)org
Subject: Re: Typo in perform.sgml?
Date: 2019-12-08 02:51:01
Message-ID: 20191208.115101.1888716664784456518.t-ishii@sraoss.co.jp
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> I wrote:
>> Actually, that whole para could do with a rewrite; whoever wrote
>> it was obviously not familiar with Strunk & White's dictum
>> "Omit needless words".
>
> Looking closer, there were also some unnecessary inconsistencies with
> the rest of the section, such as use of "records" rather than "rows",
> and different markup choices. I propose the attached ... it's
> actually a bit longer than the original, but that's because it
> offers more details.

Thanks for looking into this. The patch looks much cleaner than
before.

Best regards,
--
Tatsuo Ishii
SRA OSS, Inc. Japan
English: http://www.sraoss.co.jp/index_en.php
Japanese:http://www.sraoss.co.jp

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