| From: | Tom Lane <tgl(at)sss(dot)pgh(dot)pa(dot)us> |
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| To: | Julien Rouhaud <rjuju123(at)gmail(dot)com> |
| Cc: | Tatsuo Ishii <ishii(at)sraoss(dot)co(dot)jp>, pgsql-docs(at)lists(dot)postgresql(dot)org |
| Subject: | Re: Typo in perform.sgml? |
| Date: | 2019-12-07 20:56:39 |
| Message-ID: | 14957.1575752199@sss.pgh.pa.us |
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I wrote:
> Actually, that whole para could do with a rewrite; whoever wrote
> it was obviously not familiar with Strunk & White's dictum
> "Omit needless words".
Looking closer, there were also some unnecessary inconsistencies with
the rest of the section, such as use of "records" rather than "rows",
and different markup choices. I propose the attached ... it's
actually a bit longer than the original, but that's because it
offers more details.
regards, tom lane
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| improve-subplan-pruning-docs.patch | text/x-diff | 1.6 KB |
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