| From: | Julien Rouhaud <rjuju123(at)gmail(dot)com> |
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| To: | Tatsuo Ishii <ishii(at)sraoss(dot)co(dot)jp> |
| Cc: | Tom Lane <tgl(at)sss(dot)pgh(dot)pa(dot)us>, pgsql-docs(at)lists(dot)postgresql(dot)org |
| Subject: | Re: Typo in perform.sgml? |
| Date: | 2019-12-08 08:07:53 |
| Message-ID: | CAOBaU_bZ2aVw-9VLeN9=bHxHOMu4xfFMnWCP82Y93XUrOPJ=-g@mail.gmail.com |
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On Sun, Dec 8, 2019 at 3:51 AM Tatsuo Ishii <ishii(at)sraoss(dot)co(dot)jp> wrote:
>
> > I wrote:
> >> Actually, that whole para could do with a rewrite; whoever wrote
> >> it was obviously not familiar with Strunk & White's dictum
> >> "Omit needless words".
> >
> > Looking closer, there were also some unnecessary inconsistencies with
> > the rest of the section, such as use of "records" rather than "rows",
> > and different markup choices. I propose the attached ... it's
> > actually a bit longer than the original, but that's because it
> > offers more details.
>
> Thanks for looking into this. The patch looks much cleaner than
> before.
I agree this is way better!
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