Re: typo in sentence

From: "David G(dot) Johnston" <david(dot)g(dot)johnston(at)gmail(dot)com>
To: Tom Lane <tgl(at)sss(dot)pgh(dot)pa(dot)us>
Cc: Ganesh A Hegde <sgurukrupa(at)gmail(dot)com>, Magnus Hagander <magnus(at)hagander(dot)net>, Pg Docs <pgsql-docs(at)lists(dot)postgresql(dot)org>
Subject: Re: typo in sentence
Date: 2020-08-05 01:03:26
Message-ID: CAKFQuwbrs_zJsbSMCOWtxL5kF+_+FSCtHeE3eNXaRSd94WznXQ@mail.gmail.com
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On Tuesday, August 4, 2020, Tom Lane <tgl(at)sss(dot)pgh(dot)pa(dot)us> wrote:

> Ganesh A Hegde <sgurukrupa(at)gmail(dot)com> writes:
> > There is only a single sentence starting with 'if' and not two. The
> phrase
> > 'it is therefore ..' is preceded by a comma and not a period. Hence,
> > there's a single sentence and not two as you are referring to.
>
> I concur with Magnus that the "therefore" refers to the sentences
> preceding this one. While we could just drop it as you suggest,
> maybe better is to rearrange:
>
> Therefore, if one PostgreSQL server instance is to house projects or
> users that should be separate and for the most part unaware of each
> other, it is recommended to put them into separate databases.
>
>
I put forth a minor reworking of this page a little while back.

https://commitfest.postgresql.org/29/2647/

https://www.postgresql.org/message-id/CAKFQuwacZW-gNLyScFKFxCg_g7QtT7_HQMOyexuV2zUj=eQFAw@mail.gmail.com

David J.

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