Re: typo in sentence

From: Bruce Momjian <bruce(at)momjian(dot)us>
To: "David G(dot) Johnston" <david(dot)g(dot)johnston(at)gmail(dot)com>
Cc: Tom Lane <tgl(at)sss(dot)pgh(dot)pa(dot)us>, Ganesh A Hegde <sgurukrupa(at)gmail(dot)com>, Magnus Hagander <magnus(at)hagander(dot)net>, Pg Docs <pgsql-docs(at)lists(dot)postgresql(dot)org>
Subject: Re: typo in sentence
Date: 2020-08-22 00:24:52
Message-ID: 20200822002452.GM13363@momjian.us
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On Tue, Aug 4, 2020 at 06:03:26PM -0700, David G. Johnston wrote:
> On Tuesday, August 4, 2020, Tom Lane <tgl(at)sss(dot)pgh(dot)pa(dot)us> wrote:
>
> Ganesh A Hegde <sgurukrupa(at)gmail(dot)com> writes:
> > There is only a single sentence starting with 'if' and not two. The
> phrase
> > 'it is therefore ..' is preceded by a comma and not a period. Hence,
> > there's a single sentence and not two as you are referring to.
>
> I concur with Magnus that the "therefore" refers to the sentences
> preceding this one.  While we could just drop it as you suggest,
> maybe better is to rearrange:
>
>     Therefore, if one PostgreSQL server instance is to house projects or
>     users that should be separate and for the most part unaware of each
>     other, it is recommended to put them into separate databases.
>
>
>  
> I put forth a minor reworking of this page a little while back.
>
> https://commitfest.postgresql.org/29/2647/
>
> https://www.postgresql.org/message-id/
> CAKFQuwacZW-gNLyScFKFxCg_g7QtT7_HQMOyexuV2zUj=eQFAw(at)mail(dot)gmail(dot)com

Great. I made a few slight adjustments and applied it back through 9.5.

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