| From: | Erik Rijkers <er(at)xs4all(dot)nl> |
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| To: | Stephen Frost <sfrost(at)snowman(dot)net> |
| Cc: | "Joshua D(dot) Drake" <jd(at)commandprompt(dot)com>, pgsql-docs <pgsql-docs(at)postgresql(dot)org> |
| Subject: | Re: readability changes to postgres.sgml |
| Date: | 2019-08-16 05:22:39 |
| Message-ID: | 996bcfe233f558276f4f5962673ba164@xs4all.nl |
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On 2019-08-16 02:26, Stephen Frost wrote:
> Greetings,
>
> * Joshua D. Drake (jd(at)commandprompt(dot)com) wrote:
>> attached
> they seem to be simply removing words and removing content that is
For what it's worth, I think the proposed changes are all solid
improvements. The text reads better with them, and that's what this is
about -- not whether the removed little text-pieces were 'true' or not.
However, there is one typo:
+ read independently. There are many extrernal programming
extrernal -> external
(and I would say that dropping that word 'external' would be another
little improvement)
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