Re: Doc: fix track_io_timing description to mention pg_stat_io

On 2024/07/08 12:01, Hajime(dot)Matsunaga(at)nttdata(dot)com wrote:
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> From: Fujii Masao <masao(dot)fujii(at)oss(dot)nttdata(dot)com>
> Sent: Wednesday, July 3, 2024 7:44 PM
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>> On 2024/07/03 17:51, Hajime(dot)Matsunaga(at)nttdata(dot)com wrote:
>>> Thanks for the suggestions the other day.
>>> I have created a patch that incorporates your suggestions.
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>> - <structname>pg_stat_database</structname></link>, in the output of
>> + <structname>pg_stat_database</structname></link> and
>> + <link linkend="monitoring-pg-stat-io-view">
>> + <structname>pg_stat_io</structname></link>, in the output of
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>> I'm not a native English speaker, but it seems more natural to use a comma instead of "and" before "pg_stat_io."
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>> - of block read and write times.
>> + of block read, block write, extend, and fsync times.
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>> "block" before "fsync" doesn't seem necessary.
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> I'm also not a native English speaker, so I appreciate your feedback.
> I have created a patch that incorporates your feedback.

Thanks for updating the patch! Pushed.

Regards,

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