| From: | "Jonathan S(dot) Katz" <jkatz(at)postgresql(dot)org> |
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| To: | Erik Rijkers <er(at)xs4all(dot)nl> |
| Cc: | PostgreSQL Advocacy <pgsql-advocacy(at)lists(dot)postgresql(dot)org> |
| Subject: | Re: PostgreSQL 12 Press Release - First Draft |
| Date: | 2019-08-21 21:11:07 |
| Message-ID: | 7640cf7b-f26a-70ca-bf7b-ef71ddd866bc@postgresql.org |
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On 8/21/19 5:02 PM, Erik Rijkers wrote:
> On 2019-08-21 22:43, Jonathan S. Katz wrote:
>> Hi,
>>
>> Attached is a first draft of the press release for PostgreSQL 12.
>
> A few typos:
>
> 'PostgreSQL 12 also improvements the performance of' should be
> 'PostgreSQL 12 also improves the performance when'
>
> 'with blocking any queries' should be (I think)
> 'without blocking any queries'
>
> 'write-head-log' should be
> 'write-ahead-log'
>
> 'that can be computed its value from other columns'
> 'that can compute its value from other columns'
>
> and something is not quite right about the sentence containing:
> 'LDAP servers using if it'
> but I can't figure out what it should be.
Thanks! I incorporated most of your suggestions in the updated copy.
Jonathan
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