Re: PostgreSQL 12 Press Release - First Draft

Am 21.08.19 um 23:11 schrieb Jonathan S. Katz:
> On 8/21/19 5:02 PM, Erik Rijkers wrote:
>> On 2019-08-21 22:43, Jonathan S. Katz wrote:
>>> Hi,
>>>
>>> Attached is a first draft of the press release for PostgreSQL 12.
>>
>> A few typos:
>>

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>> but I can't figure out what it should be.
>
> Thanks! I incorporated most of your suggestions in the updated copy.

Awesome work as usual, Jonathan!

My 2p:

- To me, a non-native speaker, this ("select") feels odd (although I see
what's meant!) in a text on a database:
"that only need to retrieve data from a select few"

- Okular doesn't display the 'distance operator (“”)' (but that might be
Okular, afterall)

- s/can be computed its value/can be computed/ (that's been mentioned
already, I think)

- I'd personally leave the "in PostgreSQL 12" out of "additional
security and functionality in PostgreSQL 12"

- s/an authentication client/an authenticating client/ ?

Cheers!
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