Minor language edits for PostgreSQL 14 Release Notes

From: Elena Indrupskaya <e(dot)indrupskaya(at)postgrespro(dot)ru>
To: pgsql-docs(at)lists(dot)postgresql(dot)org
Subject: Minor language edits for PostgreSQL 14 Release Notes
Date: 2021-07-20 12:58:00
Message-ID: 38555778-a56b-4aca-2581-e05582fc9bcf@postgrespro.ru
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Hello everyone,

I noticed minor language inaccuracies/inconsistencies in PostgreSQL 14
Release Notes (https://www.postgresql.org/docs/14/release-14.html) A
patch to fix them is attached.
One of the replacements changes

"which reports <acronym>WAL</acronym> activity" to
"to report <acronym>WAL</acronym> activity"

because "to report" is more consistent with the rest of the text (or
just add a comma before "which").

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Elena Indrupskaya
Lead Technical Writer
Postgres Professional http://www.postgrespro.comtext.
<http://www.postgrespro.com>

Attachment Content-Type Size
rn_14_language.patch text/x-patch 1.7 KB

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