| From: | Bruce Momjian <bruce(at)momjian(dot)us> |
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| To: | Elena Indrupskaya <e(dot)indrupskaya(at)postgrespro(dot)ru> |
| Cc: | pgsql-docs(at)lists(dot)postgresql(dot)org |
| Subject: | Re: Minor language edits for PostgreSQL 14 Release Notes |
| Date: | 2021-07-20 23:37:13 |
| Message-ID: | 20210720233713.GC27025@momjian.us |
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On Tue, Jul 20, 2021 at 03:58:00PM +0300, Elena Indrupskaya wrote:
> Hello everyone,
>
> I noticed minor language inaccuracies/inconsistencies in PostgreSQL 14 Release
> Notes (https://www.postgresql.org/docs/14/release-14.html) A patch to fix them
> is attached.
> One of the replacements changes
>
> "which reports <acronym>WAL</acronym> activity" to
> "to report <acronym>WAL</acronym> activity"
>
> because "to report" is more consistent with the rest of the text (or just add a
> comma before "which").
Thanks. I added a comma as you suggested, and committed.
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