Re: [9.3] Should we mention "set_config(...)" in 18.1.3 in Server Configuration?

On Tue, Sep 9, 2014 at 03:40:45PM -0400, David Johnston wrote:
> Minor corrections:
>
> ​First block: "
> In the first section of this chapter, we
>  describe how to set configuration parameters"​
>  
> ​- remove the comma
>
> ​Second Block: 
> - placement of the colon inside or outside of the emphasis tag is inconsistent
> (string, unit, enum are inside; boolean and ​numeric are outside)
> - units:  "An numeric value..." -> maybe "An unadorned numeric value...
>
> ​Third block:
> ​"Hash marks (<literal>#</literal>) designate the remainder of lines as
> comments." -> "...designate the remainder of the line as a comment."  I read
> this at first as "remaining lines [in the file] ... "
>
> "To embed a single quote in a parameter value, write either two quotes
> (preferred) or backslash-quote." -> remove the comma
> "Querying this view is the sames as" -> "the same as"

I agree all of the above are improvements, and changed.

> "In addition to setting global defaults or attaching" <- add a comma after
> "defaults"

I didn't like this change as it causes too many comma phrases.

Attaches are the changes since yesterday's patch. The full patch is at:

ftp://momjian.us/postgresql/mypatches/config.diff

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