Re: Not clear sentence

From: Laurenz Albe <laurenz(dot)albe(at)cybertec(dot)at>
To: smeka(at)purestorage(dot)com, pgsql-docs(at)lists(dot)postgresql(dot)org
Subject: Re: Not clear sentence
Date: 2022-01-21 12:35:44
Message-ID: de2da2a3cb8de44a0b80daaf911f26e7d5ad7588.camel@cybertec.at
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On Thu, 2022-01-20 at 19:46 +0000, PG Doc comments form wrote:
> Page: https://www.postgresql.org/docs/14/backup-dump.html
> Description:
>
> Text: This is necessary to fully backup the cluster if running the pg_dump
> command on individual databases.
>
> Please provide an explanation or re-write the same, thanks.

Hm, yes, that could be improved. Perhaps:

This is required for a full backup of the cluster that is performed
by pg_dump on the individual databases.

Yours,
Laurenz Albe

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