Re: PostgreSQL 16 Beta 1 release announcement draft

On 5/19/23 11:02 AM, Justin Clift wrote:

> The sentence after that starts:
>
>   "This release also adds ..."
>
> With the one following it starting with "This includes ...".  Together,
> they a bit unwieldy too.  Maybe something like this instead?

Thanks -- I broke this one up into two sentences.

>   "This release also adds several new security-oriented connection
>    parameters for clients, including ..."
>
> ---
>
> Would this:
>
>   "You can now also set `sslrootcert` to `system` to specify that
>    PostgreSQL can use the trusted certificate authority (CA) store
>    for that operating system."
>
> Be better as?
>
>   "You can now also set `sslrootcert` to `system` to instruct
>    PostgreSQL to use the trusted certificate authority (CA) store
>    provided by the operating system."
>
> ---

I took this suggestion, with modifications.

> Nothing else is jumping out at me.  It all seems pretty good. :)

Thanks!