| From: | Peter Smith <smithpb2250(at)gmail(dot)com> |
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| To: | Bruce Momjian <bruce(at)momjian(dot)us> |
| Cc: | "David G(dot) Johnston" <david(dot)g(dot)johnston(at)gmail(dot)com>, Ashutosh Bapat <ashutosh(dot)bapat(dot)oss(at)gmail(dot)com>, Kyotaro Horiguchi <horikyota(dot)ntt(at)gmail(dot)com>, Amit Kapila <amit(dot)kapila16(at)gmail(dot)com>, shveta(dot)malik(at)gmail(dot)com, pgsql-hackers(at)lists(dot)postgresql(dot)org |
| Subject: | Re: DOCS - pg_replication_slot . Fix the 'inactive_since' description |
| Date: | 2024-10-23 21:32:54 |
| Message-ID: | CAHut+PtV2yZGEgpraxUuVTEWS3=T6fVHjpVwHZio8LawzVrECg@mail.gmail.com |
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Hi. Here are a couple of minor comments.
1.
+ The time slot synchronization (see <xref
+ linkend="logicaldecoding-replication-slots-synchronization"/>)
+ was most recently stopped.
/The time slot/The time when slot/
~~~
2.
- /* The time since the slot has become inactive */
+ /* The time slot sychronized was stopped. */
Maybe just make this comment the same as the sentence used in the docs:
- e.g. add "when"; fix, typo "sychronized", etc.
/The time slot sychronized was stopped./The time when slot
synchronization was most recently stopped./
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Kind Regards,
Peter Smith.
Fujitsu Australia
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