From: | Muhammad Ikram <mmikram(at)gmail(dot)com> |
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To: | pgsql-docs(at)lists(dot)postgresql(dot)org |
Subject: | Minor improvement in sentences to enhance readability |
Date: | 2024-06-13 08:34:46 |
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Here are some minor change suggestions which may help in improving
readability.
It is your prerogative to accept or reject
Doc : https://www.postgresql.org/docs/17/install-make.html
*Actual Text*
If you are upgrading an existing system be sure to read Section 18.6
<https://www.postgresql.org/docs/17/upgrading.html>, which has instructions
about upgrading a cluster.
*Proposed*
If you are upgrading an existing system, be sure to read Section 18.6
<https://www.postgresql.org/docs/17/upgrading.html>, which has instructions
about upgrading a cluster.
Hi,
Suggesting minor improvements in
https://www.postgresql.org/docs/17/install-make.html
to enhance readability.
*Change*
Added comma between "system and be"
--
To keep the text consistent, built might be replaced by build.
*Actual Text*
If you *built* with debugging support, stripping will effectively remove
the debugging support
*Proposed*
If you *build* with debugging support, stripping will effectively remove
the debugging support
*Change*
Replaced built by build
*Actual Text*
All files will be installed under /usr/local/pgsql by default.
*Proposed*
By default, all files will be installed under /usr/local/pgsql.
*Actual Text*
(Remember to use GNU make.) The build will take a few minutes depending on
your hardware.
*Proposed*
The build will take a few minutes, depending on your hardware (remember to
use GNU make).
*Actual Text*
use ./configure --help to get one that is
*Proposed*
use ./configure --help to see all options.
or
use ./configure --help to list all options.
Regards,
Muhammad Ikram,
Bitnine Global
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