On Fri, 17 Jul 2020 at 11:17, David G. Johnston <david(dot)g(dot)johnston(at)gmail(dot)com>
wrote:
> On Fri, Jul 17, 2020 at 8:10 AM Dave Cramer <davecramer(at)gmail(dot)com> wrote:
>
>> This started out with just fixing
>>
>> "One option do deal" to " One option to deal"
>>
>> But after reading the rest I'd propose the following patch.
>>
>
> Suggest replacing "though" with "however" instead of trying to figure out
> what amount of commas is readable (the original seemed better IMO).
>
> "However, the transaction records are fairly small and"
>
Works for me.
Thanks,
Dave