| From: | Magnus Hagander <magnus(at)hagander(dot)net> |
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| To: | Tom Lane <tgl(at)sss(dot)pgh(dot)pa(dot)us> |
| Cc: | pgsql-committers <pgsql-committers(at)postgresql(dot)org> |
| Subject: | Re: pgsql: Fix typos in comments |
| Date: | 2015-05-17 17:07:46 |
| Message-ID: | CABUevEx9UGx-W6VwACq_jfF+8EqJ9M3Y+X3ZNi7R1OPpq9NU+Q@mail.gmail.com |
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On Sun, May 17, 2015 at 5:37 PM, Tom Lane <tgl(at)sss(dot)pgh(dot)pa(dot)us> wrote:
> I wrote:
> > This change is wrong and should be reverted:
> > <para>
> > - Specifies the name of the database to connect to to dump global
> > + Specifies the name of the database to connect to dump global
> > objects and discover what other databases should be dumped. If
>
> > Or maybe we should rewrite the sentence to avoid the repeated "to".
>
> A little while later it came to me that we could write it like this:
>
> Specifies the name of the database to connect to for dumping global
> objects and discovering what other databases should be dumped.
>
That seems better, thanks. Fix applied.
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Magnus Hagander
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