Re: Sponsorship Page Language

On 11 January 2013 15:55, Jonathan S. Katz
<jonathan(dot)katz(at)excoventures(dot)com>wrote:

> Hello,
>
> When looking at the sponsorship page (
> http://www.postgresql.org/about/sponsors/) I noticed a few things
> regarding the language that I've attempted to clean up with this patch.
>
> The first regards the ordering of the sponsors - they are ordered
> randomly, not alphabetically, so I corrected the language up top.
>
> The second has to do with the language on the bottom of the page
> discussing the sponsorship levels and selection process. I reworded the
> sentences to more clearly state the purpose of the sponsorship levels are
> and how they are selected, maintaing a link to the guidelines on the wiki.
>

s/Sponsors are display/Sponsors are displayed/

s/using following/following/ although perhaps "in accordance with"

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Thom