Re: First draft of 9.5 release announcement, please comment/edit/suggest

Le 01/01/2016 22:29, Josh Berkus a écrit :
> On 01/01/2016 05:24 AM, Stefan Kaltenbrunner wrote:
>> On 01/01/2016 12:42 AM, Josh Berkus wrote:
>>> On 12/31/2015 12:16 PM, Josh Berkus wrote:
>>>> It's here:
>>>>
>>>> http://git.postgresql.org/gitweb/?p=press.git;a=blob_plain;f=releases/9.5/translate/release.translate.txt;h=2f24f8fce19151e1e120ea5b9f2da007638400b1;hb=HEAD
>>>>
>>>> Please give me your corrections, comments, and suggestions for
>>>> improvement. Thanks!
>>>>
>>> And now the text of the presskit, here:
>>>
>>> http://git.postgresql.org/gitweb/?p=press.git;a=blob;f=releases/9.5/translate/presskit95.html;h=459e4099787aa6ff24c0c5440a98637b63d2c3ec;hb=HEAD
>>
>> on a quick look this seems to be based on an older version of the
>> presskit release template not the one that was fixed for the 9.4
>> release. Couple problems I did notice on a quick check:
>>
>> * images reference http://media.postgresql.org - those should point to
>> the correct location on www.postgresql.org
> Fixing ...
>
>> * the wiki URLs are http but should be https
> Even for people without wiki accounts?
>
> Anything else?
>

In the "Quoted Company Information" and the French CNAF quote there's
two issues:

* des systèmes ,ce logiciel open source => need extra space
character after the comma : des systèmes *, ce* logiciel open source
* fiabilité et est phase de déploiement => fiabilité et est *en*
phase de déploiement

Best regards,

--
Gilles Darold
Consultant PostgreSQL
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