Re: PostgreSQL 15 release announcement draft

On 8/31/22 1:51 PM, Michael Banck wrote:
> Hi,
>
> On Tue, Aug 30, 2022 at 03:58:48PM -0400, Jonathan S. Katz wrote:
>> ### Other Notable Changes
>>
>> PostgreSQL server-level statistics are now collected in shared memory,
>> eliminating the statistics collector process and writing these stats to disk.
>> PostgreSQL 15 also revokes the `CREATE` permission from all users except a
>> database owner from the `public` (or default) schema.
>
> It's a bit weird to lump those two in the same paragraph, but ok.

I split this up for now, but I may change this section a bit.

> However, I think the "and writing these stats to disk." might not be
> very clear to people not familiar with the feature, they might think
> writing stats to disk is part of the new feature. So I propose "as well
> as writing theses stats to disk" instead or something.

Agree that this wasn't clear. I changed the language to "both". I'll
attach the updated draft in the next reply.

Thanks,

Jonathan