Re: Doc typo?

Tatsuo Ishii <ishii(at)sraoss(dot)co(dot)jp> writes:
> While translating the manual into Japanese, I had a hard time to
> parse following sentence in func.sgml:

> Note that granting users the EXECUTE privilege on the
> <function>pg_read_file()</function>, or related, functions allows them the
> ability to read any file on the server which the database can read and
> that those reads bypass all in-database privilege checks.

> It seems there's an extra comma between "related" and "functions". Am I correct?

I'd move the comma not remove it; and I think "the pg_read_file()" is
pretty bad English too. So perhaps

Note that granting users the EXECUTE privilege on
<function>pg_read_file()</function>, or related functions, allows them the
ability to read any file on the server which the database can read and
that those reads bypass all in-database privilege checks.

regards, tom lane