Re: Additional Chapter for Tutorial

From: Justin Pryzby <pryzby(at)telsasoft(dot)com>
To: Erik Rijkers <er(at)xs4all(dot)nl>
Cc: Jürgen Purtz <juergen(at)purtz(dot)de>, "David G(dot) Johnston" <david(dot)g(dot)johnston(at)gmail(dot)com>, pgsql-hackers(at)lists(dot)postgresql(dot)org
Subject: Re: Additional Chapter for Tutorial
Date: 2020-10-31 21:34:44
Message-ID: 20201031213444.GB22691@telsasoft.com
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On Fri, Oct 30, 2020 at 05:45:00PM +0100, Erik Rijkers wrote:
> On 2020-10-30 11:57, Jürgen Purtz wrote:
> > On 26.10.20 15:53, David G. Johnston wrote:
> > > Removing -docs as moderation won’t let me cross-post.
> > >
>
> Hi,
>
> I applied 0009-architecture-vs-master.patch to head
> and went through architecture.sgml (only that file),
> then produced the attached .diff

Now I applied 0009 as well as Erik's changes and made some more of my own :)

I'm including all patches so CFBOT is happy.

> 3.
> 'accesses' seems a somewhat strange word most of the time just 'access' may
> be better. Not sure - native speaker wanted. (no changes made)

You're right, and I included that part.

--
Justin

Attachment Content-Type Size
0001-Additional-Chapter-for-Tutorial.patch text/x-diff 21.5 KB
0002-Fix-accesses-per-suggestion-from-Erik.patch text/x-diff 1.9 KB
0003-More-fixes-on-top.patch text/x-diff 26.8 KB

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