Re: Clarification to pg_upgrade docs on reverting to old cluster

From: Bruce Momjian <bruce(at)momjian(dot)us>
To: Daniel Gustafsson <daniel(at)yesql(dot)se>
Cc: Magnus Hagander <magnus(at)hagander(dot)net>, "pgsql-docs(at)lists(dot)postgresql(dot)org" <pgsql-docs(at)lists(dot)postgresql(dot)org>
Subject: Re: Clarification to pg_upgrade docs on reverting to old cluster
Date: 2019-04-17 22:01:44
Message-ID: 20190417220144.23ievs3hegisftop@momjian.us
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On Fri, Apr 12, 2019 at 06:53:14AM +0000, Daniel Gustafsson wrote:
> On Friday, April 12, 2019 3:48 AM, Bruce Momjian <bruce(at)momjian(dot)us> wrote:
>
> > On Fri, Apr 5, 2019 at 02:23:22PM +0000, Daniel Gustafsson wrote:
> >
> > > On Friday, April 5, 2019 2:26 PM, Magnus Hagander magnus(at)hagander(dot)net wrote:
> > > but wouldn't it sound better with "in this case" than "at this point"? And
> > > as a really small nitpick, restore from backup, rather than backups?
> > > Agreed.
> > >
> > > The third bulletpoint also seems quite complicated really. If we're
> > > tweaking these, wouldn't it be better if we split that one in two -- one
> > > for "if you ran it without --link", that should reallyi be listed above any
> > > of the other options?
> > >
> > >
> > > Looking at it closer I tend to agree, and updated the patch to split this up in
> > > an attempt to make it a bit clearer for newcomers to pg_upgrade. How about the
> > > attached version?
> >
> > I agree that current paragraph is terrible --- it is too dense and
> > confusing. I liked your sub-bullets. I adjusted your patch to tighten
> > the language, and reordered the entries to appear in the order the
> > actions would be performed.
> >
> > Updated patch attached.
>
> The order of the bullets is much better in your patch, thanks!

Patch applied and backpatched through 9.4. Thanks.

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