Re: postgresql 11 release notes

On Thu, Jun 21, 2018 at 05:08:39AM -0500, Brad DeJong wrote:
> On Tue, Jun 19, 2018 at 9:20 PM, Euler Taveira <euler(at)timbira(dot)com(dot)br> wrote:
> > I left this change in the v2 patch.
> > I didn't remove it because it was an Oxford comma; I removed it because
> > there are only two items, tables and files, so this should not be a comma
> > separated list.
> > Unlogged and temporary both modify tables and tell us what kind of tables
> > are being excluded.
> > If this was a list, the items should be semi-colon separated because of
> the
> > comma between unlogged and temporary.
> > For example - Exclude unlogged, temporary tables; b-tree indexes; and
> > pg_internal.init files from streaming base backups.
> >
> I see. I think the sentence should be "Exclude unlogged tables,
> temporary tables, and <filename>pg_internal.init</filename> files from
> streaming base backups".
>
>
> I like it. Done. 

Patch applied. This was a great help, thanks. The "This features" typo
was already found. I did not apply this part since it would have added
whitespace after the period.

> - Add <link
> - linkend="pg-stat-activity-view"><structname>pg_stat_activity</structname>.<structfield>backend_type</structfield></link>
> + <link linkend="pg-stat-activity-view"><structname>pg_stat_activity</structname>.
> + <structfield>backend_type</structfield></link>

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