Re: PG 10 release notes

On Tue, Apr 25, 2017 at 01:06:05PM -0400, Tels wrote:
> Moin,
>
> On Mon, April 24, 2017 9:31 pm, Bruce Momjian wrote:
> > I have committed the first draft of the Postgres 10 release notes. They
> > are current as of two days ago, and I will keep them current. Please
> > give me any feedback you have.
>
> Thank you! Here is one thing I noticed:
>
> "By default planning and execution is display by EXPLAIN ANALYZE and not
> display in other cases. The new EXPLAIN option SUMMARY allows explicit
> control of this."
>
> The grammar sounds a bit off, I'd suggest:
>
> "By default planning and execution time are both displayed by EXPLAIN
> ANALYZE and not displayed in other cases. The new EXPLAIN option SUMMARY
> allows explicit control of this feature."

I think all that was missing was "time":

By default planning and execution time is display by
<command>EXPLAIN ANALYZE</> and not display in other cases.
The new <command>EXPLAIN</> option <literal>SUMMARY</> allows
explicit control of this.

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