From: | Josh Berkus <josh(at)agliodbs(dot)com> |
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To: | PostgreSQL advocacy <pgsql-advocacy(at)postgresql(dot)org> |
Subject: | Release, 3rd draft |
Date: | 2005-10-03 19:01:40 |
Message-ID: | 200510031201.40772.josh@agliodbs.com |
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Folks,
Please take a look at the current draft, (both in docs and in CVS). I've
made a few changes:
1) Added a summary paragraph per Lance's suggestion. I merged it with the
1st paragraph and re-wrote the 2nd so that it flows.
2) Lance, I still need a title for you. What are you, R&D director? What?
3) I replaced the "these are the features" sentences with sub-headers.
Those sentences seemed redundant with the summary para.
4) After some reflection, I cut the stuff with OSDL. It's too much. We
mention 8-way and 16-way machines up above. If we really want the OSDL
stuff, then I'd say cut Merlin's quote and get one from Mark Wong.
Comments?
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--Josh
Josh Berkus
Aglio Database Solutions
San Francisco
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