Re: Press release, hopefully final draft this time

From: Josh Berkus <josh(at)agliodbs(dot)com>
To: pgsql-advocacy(at)postgresql(dot)org
Cc: Peter Eisentraut <peter_e(at)gmx(dot)net>, Robert Treat <xzilla(at)users(dot)sourceforge(dot)net>, Lamar Owen <lowen(at)pari(dot)edu>
Subject: Re: Press release, hopefully final draft this time
Date: 2004-09-29 21:34:18
Message-ID: 200409291434.18290.josh@agliodbs.com
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> > "PostgreSQL is distributed under a BSD license, which allows for use
> > and distribution without licensing fees of any kind in either
> > commercial or non-commercial applications."
>
> The correct verb here is "allow", not "allow for". "of any kind" is
> redundant.

I agree with Peter:

PostgreSQL is distributed under a BSD license, which allows use and
distribution without fees for both commercial and non-commercial
applications.

both ... and vs. either ... or is a wierd one in English, and I suspect
national in usage.

--
--Josh

Josh Berkus
Aglio Database Solutions
San Francisco

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