Re: Press release, hopefully final draft this time

From: Josh Berkus <josh(at)agliodbs(dot)com>
To: pgsql-advocacy(at)postgresql(dot)org
Subject: Re: Press release, hopefully final draft this time
Date: 2004-09-28 16:33:35
Message-ID: 200409280933.35456.josh@agliodbs.com
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Greg,

Thanks for copy-editing. Some blow-back:

> > Through automatically and continously archived transaction logs,
> > this feature allows full data restore
>
> A little awkward to read: it's a lot of big words before the
> subject shows up.

Suggested re-write? That feature has been re-written 4 times; it may be
awkward now, but at least it's clear what it does (I think).

> > transactions, stored procedures, triggers, and subqueries
>
> Actually, per the recent discussion on hackers, we don't have stored
> procedures yet. :)

Hmmm .... good point, especially if we're going to announce them for 8.1.

> > PostgreSQL is distributed under a BSD license, which allows fee-free
> > use and distribution, for both commercial and non-commercial
> > applications.
>
> The "fee-free" is an odd phrase.

Other suggestions?

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Josh Berkus
Aglio Database Solutions
San Francisco

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