From: | Kevin Grittner <kgrittn(at)ymail(dot)com> |
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To: | Marti Raudsepp <marti(at)juffo(dot)org>, pgsql-docs <pgsql-docs(at)postgresql(dot)org> |
Subject: | Re: [PATCH] Various documentation typo/grammar fixes |
Date: | 2014-08-25 13:46:47 |
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Marti Raudsepp <marti(at)juffo(dot)org> wrote:
> I ran the Topy typo-fixer (https://github.com/intgr/topy , using rules
> developed for Wikipedia) over the PostgreSQL documentation directory.
> Attached is a patch with hand-picked fixes that are clearly an
> improvement.
>
> There are also some changes that I didn't include that seem somewhat
> opinionated, for example:
> * "eg" -> "e.g."
> * "etc" -> "etc."
These two seem to me like they should be changed; otherwise they
just don't look correct.
> * "the exact same" -> "exactly the same"
The old version sounds a bit colloquial to my ear, so it seems like
it may be worth changing. The problem is, this change doesn't seem
like it would generally be a direct substitution; it may require a
major reorganization of the sentence. I think the resulting
sentences need to be compared to see which is more clear and
concise.
> * "newly-received" -> "newly received"
> * "recently-used" -> "recently used"
I think these depend on context. To me, the former scans better
when the combination of words is used as an adjective.
--
Kevin Grittner
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